Wednesday, 30 June 2010

Narrative written by Danielle
Once upon a time in a beautiful house there lived a mother named Sarina and a little girl named Christall.

One day Christall was bored so she started to play with a lighter. Then Christall saw a fire. She shouted: “Fire, fire, fire.’’ Christall went to the mailbox. She saw her mum there.

Mum dialled 111. The fire fighters came and put the fire out. They were safe and lived happily ever after.


Plessius family said...

Hi Danielle,
I liked the way you set your story out in a logical order.
Karl's mum

Nelya room2 said...

Hi there Danielle!
I think that you have very good writing skills and i enjoyed reading your story about the beautiful house.
Keep going hard on what you want to achieve!
Nelya room 2

Tatiana said...

Hey Danielle,

I really like the beginning and end of your story.I like how your picture stands out.

Tatiana r7

Danielle mailata said...

Hi Danielle
What a good story you wrote your story really entertand me I like the picture that you choose
From Danielle p.s Keep on doing storys.