Friday, 18 June 2010

Narrative written by Edwina

A fire in a house.

Once upon a time there lived two children named Katie and Ring in a house. They were sleeping and they woke up and saw fire coming in. So they called out: "Fire, fire, fire."

They got out of their bed , got down, got low and got out fast. They went to the mail box and they saw their mum there.

Their mum rang 111. After a few minutes, the firefighters came and put out the fire with the hose. They were now safe and they lived happily ever after.


Little Voices, Little Scholars. said...

Wow! What a beautiful story you have written! Thank you for sharing! I look forwards to more stories from you!

Mrs She.

Melville Intermediate, Hamilton said...

Edwina I like that your story had a happy ending, and I think that putting a picture with it online was a really good idea so that we could imagine what the house was like.
Mr Webb, Melville Intermediate School, Hamilton, Waikato.

jonah said...

Hi Edwina I really like you story about a fire in a house because it's cool to read.