We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
Wednesday, 30 June 2010
Narrative written by Danielle
Once upon a time in a beautiful house there lived a mother named Sarina and a little girl named Christall.
One day Christall was bored so she started to play with a lighter. Then Christall saw a fire. She shouted: “Fire, fire, fire.’’ Christall went to the mailbox. She saw her mum there.
Mum dialled 111. The fire fighters came and put the fire out. They were safe and lived happily ever after.
Tuesday, 29 June 2010
Narrative retold by Hannah
One day Mia, James and Mum went out to school camp. Tamati was sad. Dad cooked his favourite food. Sam gobbled up one of his sausages and he gave one of his carrot sticks and begged for more. Dad tucked Tamati into bed. He said: “Look Tamati.it is way past your bed time I’ll let Sam sleep here for just this once.”
Sam and Tamati closed their eyes. Suddenly they heard a loud noise. Beep, beep, beep. Sam started barking. He didn’t stop. They were scared. Then they went out and yelled: “Fire, fire, fire.” They got, down got low and got out fast. They grabbed the torch and turned it on. Then they got to the front door. They got outside and ran to the safe meeting place and dad was already there. They were glad.
Then dad dialled 111 on his mobile phone. They waited for the fire fighters to come. Then they heard a loud noise. It was the fire truck. The firemen got the hose and hosed the fire down. They lived happily ever after.
By Hannah
Monday, 28 June 2010
Narrative by Edwina
Once upon a time there lived a boy called Tamati and a dog called Sam.
One night Dad said to Tamati: “It’s late and it’s not time to read.” When Tamati and Sam were sleeping they heard a sound and that went: “Beep, beep, beep.” So they jumped out of the bed and ran out. Tamati said: “We got to get out of here.” So they were ran and they called out: “Fire, fire, fire.”
After that they got outside and they saw their Dad at the safe meeting place.Dad rang 111 on his mobile and he said: “Please can we have a fire-fighter?” In a few minutes the fire fighter came and got the hose out and went inside to see if anyone was there.
They were safe and they lived happily ever after.
Friday, 25 June 2010
Narrative by Anamanu
A long time ago there was a mum called Katherine, dad called Samuel, a dog called Sam and three children called Tamati, James and Mia. Katherine, Mia and James went camping.
Tamati and Sam went to the dining room and ate their meal with Samuel. Tamati gave some of his broccoli to Sam. So Sam said: “I can’t eat this food. It’s too crunchy.” When they finished their yummy meal, they went in the living room and watched a movie.
It was time to go to bed. Dad read a story to Tamati. Tamati was woken up by a loud noise. It was the smoke alarm going: ‘’Beep, beep, beep.” Tamati and Sam got down, got low and got out fast. Tamati and Sam ran out through the front door and went to the safe meeting place and dad was already there.
Dad dialled 111 to call the fire-fighter. Tomas, the fire fighter arrived. Tomas put out the fire. They were safe and lived happily ever after.
A fire in the house
One day there lived a lady called Shan and a man called Ray. They had a son called Dennis which is me.
One day my mum was cooking dinner. She left the kitchen. I came out of my room. I saw the fire. I shouted: “Fire , fire, fire.” I ran out side. I saw my mum and dad at the safe meeting place.
My dad dialled 111. The fire fighter hosed the fire out. We lived happily ever after.
Firewise
Thursday, 24 June 2010
Narrative retold by Jonah
Once upon a time there was a mum and a dad who had three children. One day mum and two of the children went for a holiday. One child called Tamati stayed with his dog and his dad.
One night Tamati and his dad were eating dinner and Sam wanted to eat. Then Tamati gave Sam some food of his.
After eating they watched a DVD. Then Tamati went to sleep. The fire alarm went: “Beep, beep, beep.” Tamati called out: “Fire, fire, fire.” He got out through the front door. Then Tamati told Sam: “Don’t go in there.” They went to the meeting place.
Tamati’s dad rang 111 and the firemen came and put out the fire. They were now safe and lived happily ever after.
Wednesday, 23 June 2010
Narrative by Anamanu
A long time ago in a house the Ifoni family lived. Elenoa, the mum was cooking bacon and eggs. Emma and Tangi, the children were playing with candles and matches. They lit the candles.
Elenoa shouted: ‘’ Come eat lunch!!!” So Emma and Tangi left the candles and matches in the living room. They went into the dining room and ate their delicious meal. Five minutes later they went to the living room and got some paper and put it on the fire. It turned into a large fire. Emma and Tangi shouted: ‘’ Fire, fire, fire.’’!!
So Elenoa, Emma and Tangi ran to the safe meeting place which was the mailbox. Elenoa dialled 111. The fire fighters came. Tom the fire fighter got the hose and put out the fire.
So the housing people built a brand new house for the Ifoni family. They lived happily ever after.
Tuesday, 22 June 2010
Narrative by Christy
One night Jessie went outside to have a smoke while the children were sleeping. Then she wanted to go to the toilet. So she left the cigarette on the window sill. When she came back from the toilet she saw fire. So she shouted: “Fire, fire, fire”. All the children got down, got low and got out.
Jessie dialled 111. The firemen came and put out the fire. They were safe and lived happily ever
after.
Monday, 21 June 2010
Narrative by Siupeli
Once upon a time there lived a mum called Shine and a dad called Sam. They had 2 children called Dick and Sony.
Their house was on fire because they left their cooking unattended. The boys called out: “Fire, fire’’ fire’’.
In the boy’s room they heard a loud noise. It went: “Beep, beep, beep’’. The boys got down, got low and got out fast.
They assembled at the safe meeting place which was the mailbox. They saw their parents who were already there.
The parents dialled 111 on their mobile phone. Then the fire fighters arrived at their house. They put out the fire. Sam, Shine, Dick and Sony were now safe and they lived happily ever after.
Friday, 18 June 2010
Narrative written by Edwina
A fire in a house.
Once upon a time there lived two children named Katie and Ring in a house. They were sleeping and they woke up and saw fire coming in. So they called out: "Fire, fire, fire."
They got out of their bed , got down, got low and got out fast. They went to the mail box and they saw their mum there.
Their mum rang 111. After a few minutes, the firefighters came and put out the fire with the hose. They were now safe and they lived happily ever after.