We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
Tupac, I liked listening to your retell of Maui and the Sun. You used a clear voice and some very descriptive words.
hi tupac its me hola i liked your narative about maui so keep up the good workby hola
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Hello Tupac,I listened to you retell of Maui and the Sun and thought you did really well. I am sure it is hard to speak clearly and not making a mistake. I have not yet done anything like this. I might try!
Hi, Tupac. I enjoyed listening to your narrative about Maui and the Sun. You used some descriptive words, and looked very confident. Well done.
Fantastic work Tupac. You have done a great job in telling the story.
Well done Tupac. Maui is one of my favourite legends. I like the way you retold the legend in your own words in a good, clear speaking voice.
I like Maui's stories too and you have done a good job retelling that. Thanks for sharing.Mrs She @ Pt England School.
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Hi Tupac I laugh at you Ha,Ha.
well done tupac keep up the good work you have done and its nice to hear you have made blogsby hola
tupac i really liked your maui storyby hola
http://www.glenbrae.school.nz/index
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Tupac, I liked listening to your retell of Maui and the Sun. You used a clear voice and some very descriptive words.
hi tupac its me hola i liked your narative about maui so keep up the good work
by hola
goodworkonyournarrative
Hello Tupac,
I listened to you retell of Maui and the Sun and thought you did really well. I am sure it is hard to speak clearly and not making a mistake. I have not yet done anything like this. I might try!
Hi, Tupac. I enjoyed listening to your narrative about Maui and the Sun. You used some descriptive words, and looked very confident.
Well done.
Fantastic work Tupac. You have done a great job in telling the story.
Well done Tupac. Maui is one of my favourite legends. I like the way you retold the legend in your own words in a good, clear speaking voice.
I like Maui's stories too and you have done a good job retelling that. Thanks for sharing.
Mrs She @ Pt England School.
hiTupacyouhadaclearvoiceandagoodnarative.FROMAARON
Hi Tupac I laugh at you Ha,Ha.
well done tupac keep up the good work you have done and its nice to hear you have made blogs
by hola
tupac i really liked your maui story
by hola
http://www.glenbrae.school.nz/index
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