Friday, 29 May 2009

Narrative of How Maui slows down the sun rewritten by Keren

Maui slows down the sun

Tamanui Te Ra, the sun was going quickly across the sky.

He was always going fast past Maui’s village .Maui and his brothers thought of a plan. They made a special rope and they struck the sun until it felt the pain and cried with anger.

From that day on Tamanui Te Ra promised to go slowly through the heavens. The people were happy because they had longer days and could do more.



Miss Elia said...

Hi Keren
I enjoyed reading your story about how Maui slowed the sun. You made it interesting by including details such as the sun's name, and explaining why the people were so happy that the sun promised to move more slowly.
Good on you!

vaivasa said...

hi keren good work. vaivasa