Friday 8 May 2009

Keren's recount

This is a recount about what Keren did in her holidays. She went to her aunt's, McDonalds and the movies.

13 comments:

Radha Moopanar said...

Well done on your recount Keren. Keep up the good work.

Miss Elia said...

Kia ora, Keren
I'm glad you had such a good time during the holidays. The way you included details about the movie made it really interesting.

Anonymous said...

hi Keren , you did a really fantastic and intresting and you are a very good at publishing your recount.

Anonymous said...

hi Keren , you did a really fantastic and intresting and you are a very good at publishing your recount.

Tatiana said...

Hi Keren,

loved your recount.I liked that you put in how you felt about you going to the movies.keep up the good work.you spoke very cleary and we could hear every single word you said.your recount was very interesting.

from Tatiana

Tim Cox said...

Thank you for telling me about your holidays.

Anonymous said...

I enjoyed listening to your recount. It was very interesting.I'm pleased you had a good time. Keep the good work.
Mrs Golder

Room 18 said...

Hi Keren

It sounds like you had a fantastic holiday. Your detailed description about what you ate at your aunts house made me hungry!
I'm glad you enjoyed the movie, even though you say it was a 'boy' movie.

Well done!

Mrs Lagitupu

Melelangi said...

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kato said...

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melelangi said...

Hi Keren

I really liked your recount.you speak clearly and loudely .

from melelangi.

Tamika said...

Hi Keren you did a really cool podcast nd you spoke clearly. FROM Tamika.

samuel said...

Hi Keren you did a cool podcast and you spoke very clearly.from samuel.