Friday, 1 May 2009

Tatiana's recount

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This is a recount about what Tatiana did during her school holidays. She went to the pools.

14 comments:

Manaiakalani said...

Hi Tatiana, I am so pleased to see you back on this blog sharing your lovely writing. I don't think I have seen you since last year, and I do think that your reading is already much better! Keep up the good writing and I will be looking out for it.
Mrs Burt

simoon said...

Well done Tatiana. Your recount gave me all the information I needed to learn about your fun holiday. I think you used expression well when you read your recount. I'm looking forward to listening to you reading your myth later in the term.
Mrs Boyer

Miss Elia said...

Kia ora,Tatiana
I'm glad you enjoyed your holiday so much.
Your reading is very clear and fluent. Well done!

Gloria said...

Hi Tatiana!I liked your story. I loved your clear voice too.


From Gloria

june said...

Hi Tatiana

that was a really good recount I hoped you had a wonderful time there.


From June

Anonymous said...

glad YOU ENJOYed your holidays

Miss Paton said...

Hi Tatiana,

How are you?
You read your recount clearly and loudly. I also liked how you gave eye contact to the camera.
I like going to the Panmure Pools too. I try and do 20 lengths freestyle in the inside pool and then relax in the spa pool. It's a great place to visit. Keep up the great work.

From, Miss Paton

sariah said...

hi tatiana

your recount is lovey



from sariah

KEREN said...

Hi TATIANA , your recount was fantastic you are very intalligent and going to the Panmure pools sounds like you had fun. From KEREN.

KEREN said...

Hi TATIANA , your recount was fantastic you are very intalligent and going to the Panmure pools sounds like you had fun. From KEREN.

Asena said...

Hi Tatiana I really like your Movie about the holiday what did you do at the swimming pool from Asena

Mrs Golder said...

Your voice is clear and your words are well annunciated. Well done. Keep up the good work.
Mrs Golder

Room 1 said...

Wow, Tatiana, it sounds like you had a really fun holiday! I liked the expression you used in your voice--it made me wish I had been there too!
Look forward to hearing more of your adventures.
Ms George

Marja Pole said...

Hi Tatiana'
I really enjoyed the way you spoke so clearly and expressively about your holiday. You also concluded your account effectively.
Marja Pole