Friday, 29 May 2009

Recount of how Melelangi spent Mother's Day

This is a recount of how Melelangi spent Mother's Day with her mum. They went to Palmerston North. She bought a present for her mum and made her a card.

4 comments:

Room10@Ptengland school said...

Hi Melelangi,
That was a great piece of writing. You spoke very clearly. Keep up the great writing.

Miss Lavakula and Room 10@Pt England School

Room 3 & Miss Paton said...

Hi Meleangi,

We liked listening to your voice and you spoke clearly. We liked how you paused at full stops.

Well done

From Room 3 and Miss Paton

june said...

hi melelangi

welldone

by june

Miss Elia said...

Hi Melelangi
You did a great job of showing your mum how special she is to you. No wonder she enjoyed her Mothers' Day so much. Well done.