This is a narrative of Jack and the Beanstalk retold by Joan.
15 comments:
Miss Elia
said...
Hi Joan You retold the story very clearly. I thought it was really good the way you used repetition to show how high the beanstalk was (up, up , up and down, down down). Good on you.
Hi Joan, You expressed the story very clearly. You read it really well. Your voice was nice, loud and clear. I could see by your face that you were enjoying the story. I really enjoyed listening to you. Well done, Joan. Nana Bella
you did a great job on speking you did a great jobb on your brainstom and you got a nice voice and you have a nice,wonderful voice and have a fun day with your singing group.
15 comments:
Hi Joan
You retold the story very clearly. I thought it was really good the way you used repetition to show how high the beanstalk was (up, up , up and down, down down). Good on you.
Hi Joan,
You expressed the story very clearly. You read it really well. Your voice was nice, loud and clear. I could see by your face that you were enjoying the story. I really enjoyed listening to you. Well done, Joan.
Nana Bella
Hi jona.
you had a good story and you spiked vrer good to me.
jezebella.
Hey Joan
I liked when you spoke nice and clearly and i liked it when you retold the story very clearly
Hi Joan I really liked how you were speaking clearly.You were amazing.I realy enjoyed your story.
hi joan
i like the way you spoke clearly
dear joan
i really like your narritive story. i would like to hear you make a story again.
Love anamanu
Hi joan you speak very clearly i enjoyed it
Hey Joan i liked how you spoke clearly i realy loved it
Hi Joan
I like your story it was very interesting and I like the way you spoke.
from eseki
Hi Joan
you did a great job on speking you did a great jobb on your brainstom and you got a nice voice and you have a nice,wonderful voice and have a fun day with your singing group.
love by kato and jezebella
HI JOAN I LIKE WHEN YOU SPEAK CLEARLY ON THE SCREEN
Hi Joan I really liked your story about Jack and the Bean stalk.
Hi Joan
I really liked your story about Jack and the Bean Stalk.
hi joan
it me tominika i like your story it is very nice and your story is very cool love tominika.
Love by tominika.
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