Thursday, 23 September 2010

Hooking the reader

Listen to Eseki beginning and ending her writing using the same hook.

video

5 comments:

Layla said...

hey its me layla i liked your story about the beach and i liked how you spoke and you did fantastic on speaking

LAYLA said...

hey i liked the way you spoke nicely

Edwina said...

Hi baby ruby I like when your smiling and the way your mum is holiding you and i enjoued it.

Gabriel said...

hey! it's me Gabrial i liked your story about the beach and i liked how you spoke and you did fantasic on speaking

Edwina said...

Hi Eseki I loved your story about the trip to the fire station and I hope you do some more story.