Monday, 13 September 2010

Hooking the reader

Listen to Jerome beginning his writing and ending it using the same hook.
video

4 comments:

Miss Elia said...

Kia ora, Jerome
I think your hook was great. It gained my attention because I love the beach, too. Good on you!

Edwina said...

Hi Edwina I really like your hook and it was so great and beautiful and I hope you do some more hook.

AJ said...

Hi jerome your hook was very cool good on you by your mate AJ.

moli said...

hi Jerome I like your story about your holiday it was fantastic.


by moli