Tuesday, 21 September 2010

Hooking the reader

Listen to AJ beginning and ending his writing using the same hook.

video

7 comments:

Miss Elia said...

Hi AJ
You have lots of interesting reasons for loving the beach.
I love the beach, too. I love it because I love swimming in the sea (just so long as it is warm).

siale said...

Hi Aj you had a cool comment

Jonah said...

Hi Aj you have a cool story because you spoke cleary and keep it up.

Joseph and Timote said...

Hi AJ that was cool because i love going to the beach to its my favourite thing to do.

Anonymous said...

hi Aj that was a cool blog.was that nice?

nathaniel said...

hi aj u spoke clearly

JEROME said...

Hi AJ
I liked how you spoke clearley in your''Hooking the reader.''