We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
Hi Johnathan,You spoke clearly and loudly. You sequenced your recount correctly. I bet it was fun doing all those races. I look forward to hearing more of your recounts.FromMiss Paton
Hi JohnathanI liked how you spoke clearlyand I liked how you took part in the race.From Litani
Hi JohnathanI like the way you spoke and clealybut you need to use expression.FromMyo Htat and Luana.
Hi JohnathanAnother person who loved the dolphin dives. I think it is great to have a swimming pool at your school. It is a long time since I have taught at a school with its own pool. You are very lucky to have it.
Thank you Mrs Burt for sending me a comment and I am lucky to have a swimming pool at glenbrae school.
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