Thursday, 22 July 2010

Narrative

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This is a narrative about "Fire" written and presented by Edwina from Room 8 of Glenbrae School.

5 comments:

Maya and Toby said...

Dear Edwina,
That was a scary story that you told. We learned from it that you shouldn't leave matches lying around so then things won't catch on fire.
From Maya and Toby.

Manaiakalani said...

Hi Edwina, What a great job you have done here. You told a tale full of suspense - but with a happy ending - AND you gave me all the information I need to respond appropriately to a fire.
Well done!
Mrs Burt

HINA said...

EDWINA YOU DID REALLY WELL. YOU SPEAK OUT REALLY WELL AND CLEAR. THAT IS A GOOD MESSAGE FOR US TO LEARN HOW TO PREVENT A FIRE IN YOUR HOUSE.

alex said...

hHi I really injoyed your tale you spoke clearly.

Asena said...

Hi Edwina,

I really liked how you speak really loud and clearly. You are one good writer. Keep the good writing up.


From Asena.