We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
Dear Edwina,That was a scary story that you told. We learned from it that you shouldn't leave matches lying around so then things won't catch on fire.From Maya and Toby.
Hi Edwina, What a great job you have done here. You told a tale full of suspense - but with a happy ending - AND you gave me all the information I need to respond appropriately to a fire.Well done!Mrs Burt
EDWINA YOU DID REALLY WELL. YOU SPEAK OUT REALLY WELL AND CLEAR. THAT IS A GOOD MESSAGE FOR US TO LEARN HOW TO PREVENT A FIRE IN YOUR HOUSE.
hHi I really injoyed your tale you spoke clearly.
Hi Edwina,I really liked how you speak really loud and clearly. You are one good writer. Keep the good writing up.From Asena.
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