Monday, 26 July 2010

Narrative by Joan

This is a narrative about "Fire" written and presented by Joan from Room 8 of Glenbrae School.



Greylynn, room12 said...

Great explaining about your narrative. What we liked was that You used good expression, and a clear voice.
Since you were in a class room, it was a bit hard for us to hear you. From Madeline,Stella and Cameron.

Gabriel said...

Hi Joan it was really cool about what you said on your narrative.

Layla said...

Hi Joan i liked your Narrative!!!!!!! ********

Hannah said...

Hi Joan I really like your story about fire Ireally like it because you spoke nicely and clearly. It was the best story ever.