We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
Great explaining about your narrative. What we liked was that You used good expression, and a clear voice.Since you were in a class room, it was a bit hard for us to hear you. From Madeline,Stella and Cameron.
Hi Joan it was really cool about what you said on your narrative.
Hi Joan i liked your Narrative!!!!!!! ********
Hi Joan I really like your story about fire Ireally like it because you spoke nicely and clearly. It was the best story ever.
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