Friday 5 June 2009

Narrative of Maui and Tunaroa rewritten by Tatiana

Maui’s wife, Hina was having a bath in the water hole. Suddenly “Aaargh” screamed Hina. There was an eel chasing her because somehow the eel fell in love with her and thought she was very beautiful.

So Maui got really jealous and he decided to kill the eel. Maui planned to use an axe to chop the eel. When Maui saw the eel in the water he ran up to the eel and began chopping it.

Finally the eel was destroyed and the body became vines, the hair became trees, the head became fish and the tail became tuna. So Maui and his wife lived happily ever after.

8 comments:

Miss Elia said...

Kia ora Tatiana
I enjoyed your story about Maui and Tuanaroa. You included a lot of details, which made it interesting. I was impressed by the way you set your narrative out clearly in paragraphs and used speech marks correctly. Good on you!

Anonymous said...

Hi Tatiana

you have got a great photo of Maui and Tunaroa.Your paragraphs are in the right place.I want to read your story all the time.

litani said...

WELL Done I love your work

By litani

Anonymous said...

hi Tatiana i really think your narrative is good. From Tamika

Anonymous said...

hi Tatiana i really think your narrative is good. From Tamika

Anonymous said...

hi Tatiana i really think your narrative is good. From Tamika

faamafu said...

hi tatiana i like your narrative and keep it up.





by;Fa'amafu

Sela said...

Hi Tatiana
That was a great story about Maui and Tunaroa. I really enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to see more good work from you.Keep up the fantastic work!