Friday, 5 June 2009

Narrative of Maui and Tunaroa rewritten by Keren

One day Hina, Maui’s wife went to have a bath in the waterhole. Then Tunaroa, the eel saw her and fell in love with her.

Thereafter he chased her away. Maui got jealous and angry because Hina was his wife and went to the forest and made a spear so he could kill Tunaroa. Thereafter Maui made a net and got his spear and set off to kill Tunaroa.

When he got him he chopped off his head and it turned into a fish. He chopped off the tail and that turned into tuna, his hair turned into trees and his body turned into vines.

Maui and Hina lived happily ever after.


Miss Elia said...

Hi Keren
You set your narrative out very clearly in paragraphs and included lots of details to make your narrative interesting. Well done!

Tatiana said...

Hi Keren,

I liked your narrative.It was awesome.

Sela said...

Hey keren
That is a excellent piece of writing. I loved it.