We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
Hi Nathaniel,Well done in making a podcast. You have used some exciting describing words in your recount. I like how it is well sequenced.Keep up the great writing,From Miss Paton and Room 3
Hi Nathaniel,That was a great recount about your holiday that you have written. I don't think I could hold my breathe for one minute, was it hard? Can you remember what beach you went to? I look forward to hearing more of your stories.Miss Lavakula and Room 10 @ Pt England School
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Hi Nathaniel,
Well done in making a podcast. You have used some exciting describing words in your recount. I like how it is well sequenced.
Keep up the great writing,
From Miss Paton and Room 3
Hi Nathaniel,
That was a great recount about your holiday that you have written. I don't think I could hold my breathe for one minute, was it hard? Can you remember what beach you went to? I look forward to hearing more of your stories.
Miss Lavakula and Room 10 @ Pt England School
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