We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
Hi HolaWell done for reading your beach adventure in a clear voice. I understood every word. The water going into your mouth must have tasted very salty. Keep up the great recount writing. Look forward to hearing more of your adventures.From,Miss Paton
Well done! I enjoyed listening to you speaking. I thought that was a good recount too.From,Mrs She Pt England School
Hi HolaIt's Silas here from Pt England (I was at Glenbrae before). That was good writing, I like going to the beach too.Silas
Hi Hola how are you can you, tell room9 and room8 that I miss them and you too. Lots of love from silas I Hope you Have A good Day
Hi Hola, you sounded like you had fun. by samuel.
Hi Hola I liked your story about the beach was it cold when you had a swim? I hope you go again to the beach.es
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