Tuesday, 3 March 2009

Nathaniel's beach experience

Nathaniel from Room 8 at Glenbrae School thoroughly enjoyed his beach experience. Click to hear what he has to say.

Nathaniel would love for you to comment on his story.


Miss Paton and Room 3 said...

Hi Nathaniel,

Well done in making a podcast. You have used some exciting describing words in your recount. I like how it is well sequenced.

Keep up the great writing,

From Miss Paton and Room 3

Room 10 @ Pt England School said...

Hi Nathaniel,
That was a great recount about your holiday that you have written. I don't think I could hold my breathe for one minute, was it hard? Can you remember what beach you went to? I look forward to hearing more of your stories.

Miss Lavakula and Room 10 @ Pt England School