Thursday, 21 October 2010

Recount of a Holiday by Jonah

Hooray! On Saturday the 25th of September 2010 it was the holiday. During my holiday my family and I went bowling. I was the winner because I scored the most points.

The next morning we went to the Rainbow’s End. It was fun going on the scary rides.
The following week we went to Sylvia Park to do shopping. I bought some beautiful clothes. Then we went to the park. I enjoyed the beautiful scenery at the park.

After the park we went home and had a rest. I really enjoyed my holiday because it was cool and I had lots of fun.


Plessius family said...

Hi Jonah,
I enjoyed reading the recount of your activities during the holidays. I wish I had school holidays like you do!! I thought it was good the way you started sentences in different ways (the next mornign, the following week, then, after), taking the reader on your journey with you.
Karl & Robin's mum

Brandon said...

I enjoyed your story.