tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7012962727157032696.post2498374629262411056..comments2023-10-23T02:42:17.053+13:00Comments on Glenbrae School Room 10: Recount of a Holiday by JonahLynettehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11802268542578022003noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7012962727157032696.post-66809807354027607422011-02-01T12:00:20.885+13:002011-02-01T12:00:20.885+13:00I enjoyed your story.I enjoyed your story.Brandonhttps://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7012962727157032696&postID=249837462926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7012962727157032696.post-19046003270227008732010-10-22T13:00:49.230+13:002010-10-22T13:00:49.230+13:00Hi Jonah,
I enjoyed reading the recount of your ac...Hi Jonah,<br />I enjoyed reading the recount of your activities during the holidays. I wish I had school holidays like you do!! I thought it was good the way you started sentences in different ways (the next mornign, the following week, then, after), taking the reader on your journey with you.<br />Karl & Robin's mumPlessius familynoreply@blogger.com