This is the level that Chanel thinks she worked at on the Hellison's Model.
We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
Monday, 31 May 2010
Friday, 28 May 2010
Narrative by James
A long long time ago there lived in a princess named Hannah and a Prince called CJ. They lived in a castle.
A dragon blew fire into the castle. "Help me," said the princess.
Just then Prince CJ ran in with a fire extinguisher and put out the fire.
They got married and lived happily ever after.
The Hellison's model
This is a reflection of the stage Danielle thinks she worked at on the Hellison's model.
Thursday, 27 May 2010
Narrative by Faauta
Once upon a time there lived a Princess called Cinderella and a Prince named Noela. They lived in a castle.
A dragon blew fire into the castle. "Help me please," said the Princess. Just then, Prince Noela ran in with a fire extinguisher and put out the fire.
They got married and they lived happily ever after.
The Hellison's model
This is a reflection of the stage that Eseki thinks she worked at on the Hellison's model.
Wednesday, 26 May 2010
The Hellison's model
This is a reflection of the stage Siupeli thinks he worked at on the Hellison's model.
Narrative written by Jezebel
Once upon a time there lived a Princss called Rhonda
and a Prince called Nalla. They lived in a big castle.
A dragon blew fire into the castle. "Help me please," said the princess.
Just then prince Nalla was passing by. He ran in with a fire extinguisher and put the fire out.
The price and princess got married and live happily ever after.
Tuesday, 25 May 2010
Narrative by Nunia
A long time ago there was a girl. Her name was Princess Angelica. She lived in a castle which was beautiful.
A dragon came by and blew fire to the room that the princess was in. Angelica said, ''Help, help!"
Prince Charming was riding by and rescued Princess Angelica by poking the dragon with a knofe. Then the dragon went away. Prince Charming said ''I wish this thing won't happen ever again. They got married and lived happiliy ever after.
The Hellison's Model
This is a reflection of the stage that Joan thinks she worked at on the Hellison's model.
Monday, 24 May 2010
Narrative written by Danielle Mailata
Prince Charming saves Princess Caroline
Once apon a time there lived a princess named Caroline. She lived in a castle far , far away. One day the princess was walking in her room.
Then the princess saw a dragon. The dragon flew up and blew fire in her room. The princess yelled," Help, help!"
The prince heard a voice. He got onto his horse. He saved the princess. They got married and lived happily ever after.
Once apon a time there lived a princess named Caroline. She lived in a castle far , far away. One day the princess was walking in her room.
Then the princess saw a dragon. The dragon flew up and blew fire in her room. The princess yelled," Help, help!"
The prince heard a voice. He got onto his horse. He saved the princess. They got married and lived happily ever after.
The Hellison's model
This is a reflection of the stage that Jerome thinks he worked at on the Hellison's model.
Friday, 21 May 2010
New Student in Room 8
This is Faauta who recently came from Samoa to New Zealand and is a new student in Room 8 at Glenbrae School.
The Hellison's model
This is a reflection of the stage Apii thinks she worked at on the Hellison's model.
Thursday, 20 May 2010
Narrative written by Gemima
Prince VS Dragon
Once upon a time there was a princess named Angelina who lived in a castle. There was also a prince named Prince Charming. Princess Angelina was having a good time but then she looked out of the window and saw a dragon. The dragon blew fire into the castle.
"Help! Help! Save me," screamed the princess. "I'll save you," said the prince.The prince tried to save her but he couldn't because the dragon reached in and grabbed Angelina.
The dragon took Angelina to the evil witch. The prince followed the dragon. When the witch locked Angelina at the top of the tower. He found a ladder. He climbed up the ladder and saved Princess Angelina. So they quickly ran off.They got married and they lived happily ever after.
Once upon a time there was a princess named Angelina who lived in a castle. There was also a prince named Prince Charming. Princess Angelina was having a good time but then she looked out of the window and saw a dragon. The dragon blew fire into the castle.
"Help! Help! Save me," screamed the princess. "I'll save you," said the prince.The prince tried to save her but he couldn't because the dragon reached in and grabbed Angelina.
The dragon took Angelina to the evil witch. The prince followed the dragon. When the witch locked Angelina at the top of the tower. He found a ladder. He climbed up the ladder and saved Princess Angelina. So they quickly ran off.They got married and they lived happily ever after.
The Hellison's model
This is a reflection of the stage that Hanah thinks she worked at on the Hellison's model.
Narrative written by Dennis
Once upon a time there lived a Princess called Sharn and a Prince called Ray.
They lived in a big castle.
Sharn was cooking dinner. Then she needed to go to the toilet. The castle caught on fire.
She said: "Help me." Prince Ray heard her and sped off to the castle. He managed to save Sharn on time.
Then they got married and they lived happily ever after.
Wednesday, 19 May 2010
The Hellison's Model
This is a reflection of the stage that AJ thinks he worked at on the Hellison's model.
Tuesday, 18 May 2010
Narrative written by Anamanu
Princess Angelica and Prince Charming
Once upon a time in a palace far away there was a Princess , a King and Queen . The princess wanted her breakfast which was bacon and egg. So the maid went in the cupboard and got the bacon and egg.
The maid got the pan and cooked the egg and bacon . The maid was setting up the table while the food was cooking on the clean pan. So the princess said 'Help, help!" Then Prince Charming heard her and came along. "The castle is on fire," she said.
So the prince climbed on the horse and sped off to the castle and rescued Princess Angelica . The prince said, "You will be safe with me." They got married and lived happily ever after.
By Anamanu Mafua
Once upon a time in a palace far away there was a Princess , a King and Queen . The princess wanted her breakfast which was bacon and egg. So the maid went in the cupboard and got the bacon and egg.
The maid got the pan and cooked the egg and bacon . The maid was setting up the table while the food was cooking on the clean pan. So the princess said 'Help, help!" Then Prince Charming heard her and came along. "The castle is on fire," she said.
So the prince climbed on the horse and sped off to the castle and rescued Princess Angelica . The prince said, "You will be safe with me." They got married and lived happily ever after.
By Anamanu Mafua
The Hellison's Model
This is a reflection of the stage June thinks she worked at on the Hellison's model.
Monday, 17 May 2010
The Hellison's model
This is a reflection of the stage that
Gemima thinks she worked at on the Hellison's model.
Gemima thinks she worked at on the Hellison's model.
Narrative called "In a Castle" by Edwina
A long time ago there was a lady who lived in a castle.
She went to her room and said, "I will go and cook some food." When she was thinking about that she went out of her room to the kitchen. In the kitchen she was cooking some banana cake. As she was cooking she was talking on the telephone and she didn't know that the banana cake was ready.
In the end her palace was burnt down. She managed to escape safely.
Friday, 14 May 2010
Hellison's model
This is a reflection of the stage Alex thinks he worked at on the Hellison's model.
Friday, 7 May 2010
Thursday, 6 May 2010
Wednesday, 5 May 2010
Tuesday, 4 May 2010
My holidays
In the holidays on April the 9 it was my birthday.
I turned 9 years old. I had a big party. I had 3 large pizzas from Pizza Hut. After we had pizza my family and I had ice cream and cake. A movie came on. I ate popcorn when the movie came on. Then I got my presents.
I had a good birthday. My holiday was fun.
I turned 9 years old. I had a big party. I had 3 large pizzas from Pizza Hut. After we had pizza my family and I had ice cream and cake. A movie came on. I ate popcorn when the movie came on. Then I got my presents.
I had a good birthday. My holiday was fun.
Monday, 3 May 2010
My Holidays
Last week I went to this cool place called Rainbow's End . I went there by car. I went with my family. First we went to the boat. My little brother was very scared because it was going higher.
Next we went to my favourite place, the wild roller coaster . My little brother was scared and the man asked if I wanted have another turn on the wild roller coaster. I said: 'No'.
I had fun going to Rainbow's End. Finally we went to the eating area because I was hungry . I ate a burger and fries and also had drinks . I had a lot of fun at Rainbow's End .
Next we went to my favourite place, the wild roller coaster . My little brother was scared and the man asked if I wanted have another turn on the wild roller coaster. I said: 'No'.
I had fun going to Rainbow's End. Finally we went to the eating area because I was hungry . I ate a burger and fries and also had drinks . I had a lot of fun at Rainbow's End .
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