Friday 26 February 2010

Recount of Joan's Holiday

This is a recount of how Joan spent her holdays.

5 comments:

june said...

hey joan nice speaking on the blog!!!!

gabriel/moli said...

Joan you have a great vouce and a great recount.

By gabriel and Moli.

Layla said...

Hi joan i like your recount on the swimming pools

Hannah said...

Hi your story was great because your voise was loud and it was beautiful.It was the greatest story ever!!!.

Hannah said...

Hi Joan I really like your recount about your holiday.Your voise was amazing and your story was beautiful and amazing.Ireally really like your story.