Friday 2 November 2012

Granddad's Garden


Grand dad’s  story   was  awesome  and fantastic. Something that I liked about his garden was that it was beautiful.

Granddad’s grandchild  was  feeling  sad  and  unhappy. When  grand dad  saw  Elly  he  made  her feel  happy and  comfortable. We  learnt  that  when  we  are  sad, unhappy or angry   we  should  not  hide our  feelings. In the story when  the  house was noisy  they  would  go  outside and  swim, talk and laugh.

I really enjoyed the story because I learnt a lot.

by Samuel

9 comments:

Stephen said...

hi SAMULE I LIKE YOUR STORY ON GRANDAD,S GARDEN

Aaliyahna&Caroline said...

HI SAMEL I LIKE YOUR VERY GOOD STORY AND ME AND CAROLINE LIKE IT AND WE WANT TO MAKE ONE STORY JUST LIKE YOURS BECAUSE ITS A NICE LONG GOOD STORY AND CAROLINE WOULD LIKE TO SAY HER COMMENT!!!!
AND CAROLINE WANT TO SAY THAT YOU A VERY GOOD AT DOING YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aaliyahna&Caroline said...

HI SAMEL I LIKE YOUR VERY GOOD STORY AND ME AND CAROLINE LIKE IT AND WE WANT TO MAKE ONE STORY JUST LIKE YOURS BECAUSE ITS A NICE LONG GOOD STORY AND CAROLINE WOULD LIKE TO SAY HER COMMENT!!!!
AND CAROLINE WANT TO SAY THAT YOU A VERY GOOD AT DOING YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aaliyahna&Caroline said...

HI SAMEL I LIKE YOUR VERY GOOD STORY AND ME AND CAROLINE LIKE IT AND WE WANT TO MAKE ONE STORY JUST LIKE YOURS BECAUSE ITS A NICE LONG GOOD STORY AND CAROLINE WOULD LIKE TO SAY HER COMMENT!!!!
AND CAROLINE WANT TO SAY THAT YOU A VERY GOOD AT DOING YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

maara said...

Hi samule i like your story.

tamati said...

hi smule wellcome to glenbrae school.

tamati said...

hi smule wellcome to glenbrae school.

Alfred & Sitaleki said...

HI SAMEL I like your story.

Alfred said...

HI samel I like your story.