In the holiday I went to the pools. It was cool because I went on the hydro slide.
It was exciting. Then I went on the
bumper cars. I came second. Then we went to have lunch.
We had Mc Donald’s. Next we went to Sylvia Park to get some new clothes. I enjoyed my holiday and can't wait for the next one.
2 comments:
I think it is a nice story Joan. Well done.
hi joan were they real bumper cars or just donuts.
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