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Wednesday 22 September 2010

Jack and the Beanstalk

This is a narrative of Jack and the Beanstalk retold by Joan.

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15 comments:

  1. Miss Elia22 September 2010 at 15:56

    Hi Joan
    You retold the story very clearly. I thought it was really good the way you used repetition to show how high the beanstalk was (up, up , up and down, down down). Good on you.

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  2. Nana Bella22 September 2010 at 19:11

    Hi Joan,
    You expressed the story very clearly. You read it really well. Your voice was nice, loud and clear. I could see by your face that you were enjoying the story. I really enjoyed listening to you. Well done, Joan.
    Nana Bella

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  3. jezebella23 September 2010 at 09:31

    Hi jona.

    you had a good story and you spiked vrer good to me.

    jezebella.

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  4. Layla11 October 2010 at 10:01

    Hey Joan
    I liked when you spoke nice and clearly and i liked it when you retold the story very clearly

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  5. Hannah11 October 2010 at 10:03

    Hi Joan I really liked how you were speaking clearly.You were amazing.I realy enjoyed your story.

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  6. joan11 October 2010 at 10:21

    hi joan

    i like the way you spoke clearly

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  7. anamanu11 October 2010 at 10:29

    dear joan

    i really like your narritive story. i would like to hear you make a story again.


    Love anamanu

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  8. nunia12 October 2010 at 09:45

    Hi joan you speak very clearly i enjoyed it

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  9. layla13 October 2010 at 09:35

    Hey Joan i liked how you spoke clearly i realy loved it

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  10. Eseki Tanaki13 October 2010 at 09:59

    Hi Joan

    I like your story it was very interesting and I like the way you spoke.
    from eseki

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  11. kato and jezebella21 October 2010 at 09:43

    Hi Joan

    you did a great job on speking you did a great jobb on your brainstom and you got a nice voice and you have a nice,wonderful voice and have a fun day with your singing group.

    love by kato and jezebella

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  12. NUNIA28 October 2010 at 09:43

    HI JOAN I LIKE WHEN YOU SPEAK CLEARLY ON THE SCREEN

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  13. Hannah1 November 2010 at 09:32

    Hi Joan I really liked your story about Jack and the Bean stalk.

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  14. Hannah7 December 2010 at 09:27

    Hi Joan

    I really liked your story about Jack and the Bean Stalk.

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  15. tominika15 February 2011 at 09:40

    hi joan

    it me tominika i like your story it is very nice and your story is very cool love tominika.


    Love by tominika.

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