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Tuesday 21 September 2010

Hooking the reader

Listen to AJ beginning and ending his writing using the same hook.

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7 comments:

  1. Miss Elia21 September 2010 at 15:36

    Hi AJ
    You have lots of interesting reasons for loving the beach.
    I love the beach, too. I love it because I love swimming in the sea (just so long as it is warm).

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  2. siale23 September 2010 at 09:31

    Hi Aj you had a cool comment

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  3. Jonah23 September 2010 at 09:44

    Hi Aj you have a cool story because you spoke cleary and keep it up.

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  4. Joseph and Timote23 September 2010 at 14:25

    Hi AJ that was cool because i love going to the beach to its my favourite thing to do.

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  5. Anonymous11 October 2010 at 10:05

    hi Aj that was a cool blog.was that nice?

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  6. nathaniel11 October 2010 at 10:06

    hi aj u spoke clearly

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  7. JEROME13 October 2010 at 09:31

    Hi AJ
    I liked how you spoke clearley in your''Hooking the reader.''

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