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Thursday 23 September 2010

Hooking the reader

Listen to Eseki beginning and ending her writing using the same hook.

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5 comments:

  1. Layla13 October 2010 at 09:31

    hey its me layla i liked your story about the beach and i liked how you spoke and you did fantastic on speaking

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  2. LAYLA20 October 2010 at 09:47

    hey i liked the way you spoke nicely

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  3. Edwina28 October 2010 at 09:48

    Hi baby ruby I like when your smiling and the way your mum is holiding you and i enjoued it.

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  4. Gabriel3 November 2010 at 10:20

    hey! it's me Gabrial i liked your story about the beach and i liked how you spoke and you did fantasic on speaking

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  5. Edwina4 November 2010 at 10:47

    Hi Eseki I loved your story about the trip to the fire station and I hope you do some more story.

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