This is a recount about Tamika's school holidays. She went to the North Shore, restaurant and Sylvia Park. She also visited her uncle and aunt.
13 comments:
Miss Elia
said...
Kia ora, Tamika I enjoyed hearing about your holiday. I am curious to know which beach you went swimming at, and what you ate at the restaurant. Was you meal delicious like your dad's? Miss Elia
A limo! Wow that must have been exciting, I also enjoyed the part when you mention about your baby sister spilling her drink on her new clothes, although that probably wasn't the most happy of experiences it was really good to include it in the story as it gave the story a more 'real' part of having something in it. I also think you need to be commended for the way that you spoke which was very clear and also with expression, I think this is the sign of a confident speaker, or a good teacher! Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.
13 comments:
Kia ora, Tamika
I enjoyed hearing about your holiday. I am curious to know which beach you went swimming at, and what you ate at the restaurant. Was you meal delicious like your dad's?
Miss Elia
well done Tamika. I'm sure your holiday was very interesting
A limo! Wow that must have been exciting, I also enjoyed the part when you mention about your baby sister spilling her drink on her new clothes, although that probably wasn't the most happy of experiences it was really good to include it in the story as it gave the story a more 'real' part of having something in it. I also think you need to be commended for the way that you spoke which was very clear and also with expression, I think this is the sign of a confident speaker, or a good teacher!
Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.
Dear Tamika,
I really enjoyed your
recount and I hope you like it to.
From;Faamafu
Dear Tamika,
I really enjoyed your
recount and I hope you like it to.
From;Faamafu
Dear Tamika , you did a really good recount and it iS really intresting I enjoyed reading your recount .
what restaurant did you enjoy it
dear
tamika
I
really
enjoyed
your
recount
keep
up
the
good
work.
from
faamafu
hi tamika
I really enjoyed your recount about visting your dad.
By:vaivasa fa'aola
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welldonetamikabyTupac
Hi Tamika,
I really enjoyed enjoyed listening about your holidays.
hi tamika i really liked your recount.
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