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Friday 8 May 2009

Recount

This is a recount about Tamika's school holidays. She went to the North Shore, restaurant and Sylvia Park. She also visited her uncle and aunt.


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13 comments:

  1. Miss Elia9 May 2009 at 11:49

    Kia ora, Tamika
    I enjoyed hearing about your holiday. I am curious to know which beach you went swimming at, and what you ate at the restaurant. Was you meal delicious like your dad's?
    Miss Elia

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  2. Radha Moopanar16 May 2009 at 14:29

    well done Tamika. I'm sure your holiday was very interesting

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  3. Melville Intermediate17 May 2009 at 11:34

    A limo! Wow that must have been exciting, I also enjoyed the part when you mention about your baby sister spilling her drink on her new clothes, although that probably wasn't the most happy of experiences it was really good to include it in the story as it gave the story a more 'real' part of having something in it. I also think you need to be commended for the way that you spoke which was very clear and also with expression, I think this is the sign of a confident speaker, or a good teacher!
    Mr Webb and Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.

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  4. Faamafu18 May 2009 at 10:00

    Dear Tamika,

    I really enjoyed your
    recount and I hope you like it to.


    From;Faamafu

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  5. Faamafu18 May 2009 at 10:00

    Dear Tamika,

    I really enjoyed your
    recount and I hope you like it to.


    From;Faamafu

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  6. Anonymous18 May 2009 at 10:10

    Dear Tamika , you did a really good recount and it iS really intresting I enjoyed reading your recount .

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  7. Anonymous19 May 2009 at 09:18

    what restaurant did you enjoy it

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  8. faamafu20 May 2009 at 09:32

    dear
    tamika
    I
    really
    enjoyed
    your
    recount
    keep
    up
    the
    good
    work.
    from
    faamafu

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  9. vaivasa20 May 2009 at 09:37

    hi tamika

    I really enjoyed your recount about visting your dad.

    By:vaivasa fa'aola

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  10. Anonymous20 May 2009 at 09:40

    welldonetamikabynathaniel

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  11. Anonymous20 May 2009 at 09:42

    welldonetamikabyTupac

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  12. Tatiana2 June 2009 at 09:32

    Hi Tamika,

    I really enjoyed enjoyed listening about your holidays.

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  13. keren2 June 2009 at 09:35

    hi tamika i really liked your recount.

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