There were many activities. Some activities were the water slide with Miss Holderness and walk the plank with Miss Greenham It was up on the court and Miss Pau’vale was squirting us with the hose. The water was cold and I was freezing.
It was a fantastic day. My favourite part was when we went on the slide and it was fun. Finally the red team won and the yellow team lost.
By Melenaite.
13 comments:
hi.Melenaite your story is cool
hi.mele you are a good friend. I LIKE YOUR EYES.I like your hair and especially your beautiful recount.
hi mele I like your story.
Kia ora Melenaite,
Thank you for posting your story about the Water day at school. You included a lot of information about the events that took place on the day and who was involved (the different characters). I think most of the children at school would agree with you that the slide was the best part!
Tsana (Karl & Robin's mum)
I like the water fun day because it is fun.
Hi Mele you have wrote a big story and it nice!!!!!!!!
Hi Melenaite I like your story I enjoined reading it.
HI Mele I like your story.
Hi Melenatie your story is really cool that water day must of been really fun i could see you had lots of fun.You did well at writing about water day.It really looked liked you really had fun on the water slide.
Hi Glen Brae
I like how you done your fun water day and how you described about it too
By Rose Mapa at panmure Bridge school
Hi Melenaite I like your story
Hi Melenaite I like your story
Hi Melenaite,
I really like your Fun Water Day recount.I like the water slide too.Fantastic sentences you got there.Keep up the nice work going.
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