We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
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Wednesday 7 March 2012
Fun Water Day
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Monday the 20th February 2012 was our school fun water day. All
Glenbrae students and teachers were there and some parents and helpers
were there too. There was a red team and yellow team. All the members
of the red team and yellow team had to wear tee shirts that were
of their team colours.
There
were many activities. Some activities were the water slide with Miss
Holderness and walk the plank with Miss Greenham It was up on the
court and Miss Pau’vale was squirting us with the hose. The water was
cold and I was freezing.
It
was a fantastic day. My favourite part was when we went on the slide
and it was fun. Finally the red team won and the yellow team lost.
Kia ora Melenaite, Thank you for posting your story about the Water day at school. You included a lot of information about the events that took place on the day and who was involved (the different characters). I think most of the children at school would agree with you that the slide was the best part! Tsana (Karl & Robin's mum)
Hi Melenatie your story is really cool that water day must of been really fun i could see you had lots of fun.You did well at writing about water day.It really looked liked you really had fun on the water slide.
hi.Melenaite your story is cool
ReplyDeletehi.mele you are a good friend. I LIKE YOUR EYES.I like your hair and especially your beautiful recount.
ReplyDeletehi mele I like your story.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Melenaite,
ReplyDeleteThank you for posting your story about the Water day at school. You included a lot of information about the events that took place on the day and who was involved (the different characters). I think most of the children at school would agree with you that the slide was the best part!
Tsana (Karl & Robin's mum)
I like the water fun day because it is fun.
ReplyDeleteHi Mele you have wrote a big story and it nice!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Melenaite I like your story I enjoined reading it.
ReplyDeleteHI Mele I like your story.
ReplyDeleteHi Melenatie your story is really cool that water day must of been really fun i could see you had lots of fun.You did well at writing about water day.It really looked liked you really had fun on the water slide.
ReplyDeleteHi Glen Brae
ReplyDeleteI like how you done your fun water day and how you described about it too
By Rose Mapa at panmure Bridge school
Hi Melenaite I like your story
ReplyDeleteHi Melenaite I like your story
ReplyDeleteHi Melenaite,
ReplyDeleteI really like your Fun Water Day recount.I like the water slide too.Fantastic sentences you got there.Keep up the nice work going.