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Tuesday 17 August 2010

Narrative of Peter and the Wolf rewritten by Tominika

Peter climbed on to the roof and then climbed onto the tree.

He got a rope out of the bag and made a knot. Peter caught the wolf with the rope.

Next the hunters came and they saw the wolf. They took the wolf to the zoo.
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8 comments:

  1. Layla20 August 2010 at 17:38

    Hi Tominika i liked your wolf at the front!

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  2. Miss Hansell (Room 8)20 August 2010 at 21:54

    Keep working hard in your writing Tominika. Room 8 miss you! :)

    From Miss Hansell (Room 8 at T.P.S)

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  3. apii23 August 2010 at 09:21

    hi Tominika I like your story about peter and the wolf

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  4. Hannah23 August 2010 at 09:24

    Hi Tominika I really like your story about peter and the wolf that story was the best story ever.

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  5. anamanu23 August 2010 at 09:46

    hi tominika it's me anamanu

    what a story it was awsome but was peter i brave liked your story.

    $Anamanu$

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  6. Edwina24 August 2010 at 09:54

    Hi Tominika I really like your story about peter and the wolf and your story is amzing and best story.

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  7. Edwina31 August 2010 at 09:43

    Hi Tominika keep woking and I really like your story about the asb stadium and I really like when you were speaking louder and keep working hard and I hope you do some more story like peter and the wolf and try hard.

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  8. Chanel2 September 2010 at 09:56

    Hi Tominika i really like your story about peter and wolf.

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