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Monday 16 August 2010

Narrative of Peter and the Wolf rewritten by Alex



Early one morning Peter walked into the meadow. He saw his friend Bird. Duck was happy because Peter left the gate open.

Grandpa was disappointed that Peter went into the meadow. Bird and Cat were fighting. Cat thought it was a good time to get Bird. Instead he chased Duck.

Peter and Bird caught Wolf on a string. The hunters tried to shoot the Wolf. Peter said: “No, help me take him to the zoo”. If you listen closely you can still hear Duck quacking in Wolf’s stomach.
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5 comments:

  1. Izzy and Maya16 August 2010 at 11:28

    Dear Alex,
    we liked reading the story of peter and the wolf. We thought it was exciting to read.
    From Izzy and Maya.

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  2. alex19 August 2010 at 09:46

    Hi Alex I really injoyed your story

    well done

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  3. dannielle19 August 2010 at 09:48

    Hi Alex
    Its Danelle I like your story because you put in most of the detailes in the naritive
    From Danielle p.s Keep making graet storys like the one I just read

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  4. joan19 August 2010 at 09:50

    i alex i really liked your story it was graet

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  5. june leona19 August 2010 at 09:53

    hey alex its me june
    i thought you had a wonderful story hope you make more

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