Tuesday 17 August 2010

Narrative of Peter and the Wolf rewritten by Tominika

Peter climbed on to the roof and then climbed onto the tree.

He got a rope out of the bag and made a knot. Peter caught the wolf with the rope.

Next the hunters came and they saw the wolf. They took the wolf to the zoo.

8 comments:

Layla said...

Hi Tominika i liked your wolf at the front!

Miss Hansell (Room 8) said...

Keep working hard in your writing Tominika. Room 8 miss you! :)

From Miss Hansell (Room 8 at T.P.S)

apii said...

hi Tominika I like your story about peter and the wolf

Hannah said...

Hi Tominika I really like your story about peter and the wolf that story was the best story ever.

anamanu said...

hi tominika it's me anamanu

what a story it was awsome but was peter i brave liked your story.

$Anamanu$

Edwina said...

Hi Tominika I really like your story about peter and the wolf and your story is amzing and best story.

Edwina said...

Hi Tominika keep woking and I really like your story about the asb stadium and I really like when you were speaking louder and keep working hard and I hope you do some more story like peter and the wolf and try hard.

Chanel said...

Hi Tominika i really like your story about peter and wolf.