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Thursday 29 July 2010

NARRATIVE

This is a narrative on "Fire" retold by Chanel from Room 8 of Glenbrae School.

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7 comments:

  1. Miss Elia29 July 2010 at 17:05

    Wow, Chanel
    I really enjoyed your narrative about the fire. You read it clearly, and I loved the way you used dialogue in your story to make it more interesting. Good on you.

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  2. Layla2 August 2010 at 10:11

    hi Chanel i liked your narrative about fire and i loved the way you used dialogue in your story to make it more interesting.Good on you

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  3. Chanel's mum22 September 2010 at 19:25

    You done really well Chanel, im so proud that are learning to tell others to be fire wise. I know your confidents is growing, kia kaha love mum

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  4. Dad22 September 2010 at 19:36

    Hi Chanel im so very very proud of the work that you are doing, it warms my heart to see tou progress over the pass few years. Chanel you are young and bright plus always wanting to learn and ask questions, it pleases me to see you have goals and opportunities plus a bright future ahead - love you always Dad.

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  5. Dad22 September 2010 at 19:36

    Hi Chanel im so very very proud of the work that you are doing, it warms my heart to see tou progress over the pass few years. Chanel you are young and bright plus always wanting to learn and ask questions, it pleases me to see you have goals and opportunities plus a bright future ahead - love you always Dad.

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  6. nunia23 September 2010 at 10:05

    hello chanel you done very well at speaking clearly.








    by nunia

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  7. nanny7 December 2010 at 19:05

    hi chanel love youre story very clear on youre english.

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