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Tuesday 22 June 2010

Narrative by Christy

http://www.raytownfire.com/images/house_on_fire.jpgOnce upon a time in a house there lived a mum called Jessie with 3 children.

One night Jessie went outside to have a smoke while the children were sleeping. Then she wanted to go to the toilet. So she left the cigarette on the window sill. When she came back from the toilet she saw fire. So she shouted: “Fire, fire, fire”. All the children got down, got low and got out.

Jessie dialled 111. The firemen came and put out the fire. They were safe and lived happily ever
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7 comments:

  1. danielle14 June 2010 at 16:44

    Hi Christy

    I can see that you have been stading fire I like how ypu said that the mother said fire three times loud.

    from your best friend danielle

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  2. christy .Tuliau16 June 2010 at 09:22

    To chrisy
    I like your level on the hellison's mdoel.

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  3. Hannah16 June 2010 at 09:24

    Hi Christy I really like your story about fire in the house it was great and Wonderful I enjoyed it.

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  4. christy . Tuliau21 June 2010 at 09:49

    To Christy . Tuliau
    I like your story about the fire on the house.

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  5. June28 June 2010 at 10:21

    hi christy i can see that you have learn't alot about fire

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  6. anamanu28 June 2010 at 10:22

    hi Christy ,

    I really liked your story it was so awsome.

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  7. Danielle28 June 2010 at 10:24

    hi christy
    good work on fire

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