Maui’s wife, Hina was having a bath in the water hole. Suddenly “Aaargh” screamed Hina. There was an eel chasing her because somehow the eel fell in love with her and thought she was very beautiful.
So Maui got really jealous and he decided to kill the eel. Maui planned to use an axe to chop the eel. When Maui saw the eel in the water he ran up to the eel and began chopping it.
Finally the eel was destroyed and the body became vines, the hair became trees, the head became fish and the tail became tuna. So Maui and his wife lived happily ever after.
Kia ora Tatiana
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your story about Maui and Tuanaroa. You included a lot of details, which made it interesting. I was impressed by the way you set your narrative out clearly in paragraphs and used speech marks correctly. Good on you!
Hi Tatiana
ReplyDeleteyou have got a great photo of Maui and Tunaroa.Your paragraphs are in the right place.I want to read your story all the time.
WELL Done I love your work
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hi Tatiana i really think your narrative is good. From Tamika
ReplyDeletehi Tatiana i really think your narrative is good. From Tamika
ReplyDeletehi Tatiana i really think your narrative is good. From Tamika
ReplyDeletehi tatiana i like your narrative and keep it up.
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Hi Tatiana
ReplyDeleteThat was a great story about Maui and Tunaroa. I really enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to see more good work from you.Keep up the fantastic work!