We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
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Friday 29 May 2009
Recount of how Melelangi spent Mother's Day
This is a recount of how Melelangi spent Mother's Day with her mum. They went to Palmerston North. She bought a present for her mum and made her a card.
Hi Melelangi,
ReplyDeleteThat was a great piece of writing. You spoke very clearly. Keep up the great writing.
Miss Lavakula and Room 10@Pt England School
Hi Meleangi,
ReplyDeleteWe liked listening to your voice and you spoke clearly. We liked how you paused at full stops.
Well done
From Room 3 and Miss Paton
hi melelangi
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by june
Hi Melelangi
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job of showing your mum how special she is to you. No wonder she enjoyed her Mothers' Day so much. Well done.