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Friday 29 May 2009

Recount of how Melelangi spent Mother's Day

This is a recount of how Melelangi spent Mother's Day with her mum. They went to Palmerston North. She bought a present for her mum and made her a card.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Melelangi,
    That was a great piece of writing. You spoke very clearly. Keep up the great writing.

    Miss Lavakula and Room 10@Pt England School

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  2. Hi Meleangi,

    We liked listening to your voice and you spoke clearly. We liked how you paused at full stops.

    Well done

    From Room 3 and Miss Paton

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  3. hi melelangi

    welldone

    by june

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  4. Hi Melelangi
    You did a great job of showing your mum how special she is to you. No wonder she enjoyed her Mothers' Day so much. Well done.

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