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Friday 29 May 2009

Narrative of how Maui slows the sun rewritten by Vaivasa


Maui and the sun

The sun was going to fast and the people in the island couldn’t do much work. They had only a little bit of day time and more night time.

Maui had a bright idea and he called out to his brothers to come and help him. So Maui taught his brothers how to tie a knot to trap the sun. Maui got a special rope. Once Maui and his brothers tied up a strong, tight knot on the sun, the sun slowed down and everyone was proud of Maui.

People in the village were happy because they had enough of time during the day.

By Vaivasa
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3 comments:

  1. Sela3 June 2009 at 10:16

    Hey Vaivasa

    That is a great story. I really enjoyed reading how Maui slowed the sun down.
    Keep up the good work.

    From Sela
    Tamaki Intermediate

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  2. Miss Elia6 June 2009 at 07:53

    Hi Vaivasa
    I enjoyed your story about how Maui slowed down the sun. The way you set it out in paragraphs made it easy to read. Good on you.

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  3. Anonymous10 June 2009 at 14:46

    Hey Guys, Good Narritave on Maui And The Sun.. Thats a fasinating story too.

    Panmure Bridge Rm6
    Kori

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