loved your recount.I liked that you put in how you felt about you going to the movies.keep up the good work.you spoke very cleary and we could hear every single word you said.your recount was very interesting.
It sounds like you had a fantastic holiday. Your detailed description about what you ate at your aunts house made me hungry! I'm glad you enjoyed the movie, even though you say it was a 'boy' movie.
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Well done on your recount Keren. Keep up the good work.
Kia ora, Keren
I'm glad you had such a good time during the holidays. The way you included details about the movie made it really interesting.
hi Keren , you did a really fantastic and intresting and you are a very good at publishing your recount.
hi Keren , you did a really fantastic and intresting and you are a very good at publishing your recount.
Hi Keren,
loved your recount.I liked that you put in how you felt about you going to the movies.keep up the good work.you spoke very cleary and we could hear every single word you said.your recount was very interesting.
from Tatiana
Thank you for telling me about your holidays.
I enjoyed listening to your recount. It was very interesting.I'm pleased you had a good time. Keep the good work.
Mrs Golder
Hi Keren
It sounds like you had a fantastic holiday. Your detailed description about what you ate at your aunts house made me hungry!
I'm glad you enjoyed the movie, even though you say it was a 'boy' movie.
Well done!
Mrs Lagitupu
HIKerenyourrecountiscoolandyouspokeclearly.welldone.fromMelelangi.
hikerenyoudidareallycoolrecountandyouspokeclearly.fromkato.
Hi Keren
I really liked your recount.you speak clearly and loudely .
from melelangi.
Hi Keren you did a really cool podcast nd you spoke clearly. FROM Tamika.
Hi Keren you did a cool podcast and you spoke very clearly.from samuel.
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