Tuesday, 23 August 2011

My favourite animal


My favourite animal is a cheetah because it is fast. A cheetah is a vertebrate because it has a backbone.

5 comments:

Michelle said...

Hello Moil,
That was really cool that you like a cheetah. The thing which cought my eye was that at the first part you said what animal you like and why you like that animal. Maybe you can improve on is to say what vertebrate is because I don't know what it means but other wise you did really well.
From Michelle at stonefields school

Michelle said...

Hello Moil,
That was really cool that you like a cheetah. The thing which cought my eye was that at the first part you said what animal you like and why you like that animal. Maybe you can improve on is to say what vertebrate is because I don't know what it means but other wise you did really well.
From Michelle at stonefields school

alisi said...

Hi Moli I like your facts about animals but maybe you need to put a little more facts about the animal that you are talking about and how many things that it can do.
By Alisi

Manuae said...

Hi Moil I like the facts about the animals and I like cheeters.

Anonymous said...

Hi Moil I like your facts about
the animals.