This is a narrative on "Fire" retold by Chanel from Room 8 of Glenbrae School.
7 comments:
Miss Elia
said...
Wow, Chanel I really enjoyed your narrative about the fire. You read it clearly, and I loved the way you used dialogue in your story to make it more interesting. Good on you.
Hi Chanel im so very very proud of the work that you are doing, it warms my heart to see tou progress over the pass few years. Chanel you are young and bright plus always wanting to learn and ask questions, it pleases me to see you have goals and opportunities plus a bright future ahead - love you always Dad.
Hi Chanel im so very very proud of the work that you are doing, it warms my heart to see tou progress over the pass few years. Chanel you are young and bright plus always wanting to learn and ask questions, it pleases me to see you have goals and opportunities plus a bright future ahead - love you always Dad.
7 comments:
Wow, Chanel
I really enjoyed your narrative about the fire. You read it clearly, and I loved the way you used dialogue in your story to make it more interesting. Good on you.
hi Chanel i liked your narrative about fire and i loved the way you used dialogue in your story to make it more interesting.Good on you
You done really well Chanel, im so proud that are learning to tell others to be fire wise. I know your confidents is growing, kia kaha love mum
Hi Chanel im so very very proud of the work that you are doing, it warms my heart to see tou progress over the pass few years. Chanel you are young and bright plus always wanting to learn and ask questions, it pleases me to see you have goals and opportunities plus a bright future ahead - love you always Dad.
Hi Chanel im so very very proud of the work that you are doing, it warms my heart to see tou progress over the pass few years. Chanel you are young and bright plus always wanting to learn and ask questions, it pleases me to see you have goals and opportunities plus a bright future ahead - love you always Dad.
hello chanel you done very well at speaking clearly.
by nunia
hi chanel love youre story very clear on youre english.
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