We are a class of Year 5 and 6 students at Glenbrae School in Auckland New Zealand.
i liked your story it was cool.
Hi JoanYour recount on your story about the holiday's was intersting. I hope you write another in ter sing story next time.Excellent Work!
hi joan I like your holiday about the jumping castalby moli.
hi Joan I like your story about your holidays it was intersting Excellent work
Hi joan i liked how you speak and it was intersting and Excellent about the bounce castle.By Layla
hi joan it was nice to see how your holidays were
Hi JoanI really liked your recount about your holidays From your best friend Gemima.A
Hi joan I like your recount about your holidays really enjoyed it was coolby nunia
hey! Joan! i liked your voice
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i liked your story it was cool.
Hi Joan
Your recount on your story about the holiday's was intersting. I hope you write another in ter sing story next time.
Excellent Work!
hi joan I like your holiday about the jumping castal
by moli.
hi Joan I like your story about your holidays it was intersting Excellent work
Hi joan i liked how you speak and it was intersting and Excellent about the bounce castle.
By Layla
hi joan
it was nice to see how your holidays were
Hi Joan
I really liked your recount about your holidays
From your best friend Gemima.A
Hi joan I like your recount about your holidays really enjoyed it was cool
by nunia
hey! Joan! i liked your voice
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