In the holidays I went to Rainbow's End with my family.
I went on the dragon.The dragon was cool and it was nice and green.It went slow and then it went fast as.My dad was shouting out to me.My mum came with me on the green and yellow dragon.I felt happy and I would like to go on it again.
I really enjoyed my holiday.
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