Hi Manuae, I really enjoyed why you said a hamster is your favorite animal. The thing which will make your writing better is to say if you have a hamster at home and if you don't you can say I wish I could have one at home. From Michelle at stonefields school
Hi Manuae I love your story on your favourite animal that is a Hamster because I love Hamsters too because their so adoreble and fluffy and soft and furry.
My favourite animal is a hamster because it is a quiet pet that rolls in a ball. A hamster is a vertebrate because it has a backbone.
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Hi Manuae I really love your story keep up the good work
Hi Manuae I like hamsters to.Do you have a hamster?
Hi Manuae I like Hamsters to because it has big eyes and it is very cute and that was a very good animal you chose.
Hi Manuae,
I really enjoyed why you said a hamster is your favorite animal. The thing which will make your writing better is to say if you have a hamster at home and if you don't you can say I wish I could have one at home.
From Michelle at stonefields school
Hi Manuae I liked the piture u put up there it looks pretty and I like Hampsters too Well Done!
Hi Manuae I love your story on your favourite animal that is a Hamster because I love Hamsters too because their so adoreble and fluffy and soft and furry.
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