Hello Moil, That was really cool that you like a cheetah. The thing which cought my eye was that at the first part you said what animal you like and why you like that animal. Maybe you can improve on is to say what vertebrate is because I don't know what it means but other wise you did really well. From Michelle at stonefields school
Hello Moil, That was really cool that you like a cheetah. The thing which cought my eye was that at the first part you said what animal you like and why you like that animal. Maybe you can improve on is to say what vertebrate is because I don't know what it means but other wise you did really well. From Michelle at stonefields school
Hi Moli I like your facts about animals but maybe you need to put a little more facts about the animal that you are talking about and how many things that it can do. By Alisi
Hello Moil,
ReplyDeleteThat was really cool that you like a cheetah. The thing which cought my eye was that at the first part you said what animal you like and why you like that animal. Maybe you can improve on is to say what vertebrate is because I don't know what it means but other wise you did really well.
From Michelle at stonefields school
Hello Moil,
ReplyDeleteThat was really cool that you like a cheetah. The thing which cought my eye was that at the first part you said what animal you like and why you like that animal. Maybe you can improve on is to say what vertebrate is because I don't know what it means but other wise you did really well.
From Michelle at stonefields school
Hi Moli I like your facts about animals but maybe you need to put a little more facts about the animal that you are talking about and how many things that it can do.
ReplyDeleteBy Alisi
Hi Moil I like the facts about the animals and I like cheeters.
ReplyDeleteHi Moil I like your facts about
ReplyDeletethe animals.