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Monday 13 September 2010

Hooking the reader

Listen to Jerome beginning his writing and ending it using the same hook.
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4 comments:

  1. Miss Elia13 September 2010 at 16:46

    Kia ora, Jerome
    I think your hook was great. It gained my attention because I love the beach, too. Good on you!

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  2. Edwina21 September 2010 at 09:27

    Hi Edwina I really like your hook and it was so great and beautiful and I hope you do some more hook.

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  3. AJ21 September 2010 at 09:28

    Hi jerome your hook was very cool good on you by your mate AJ.

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  4. moli15 March 2011 at 09:30

    hi Jerome I like your story about your holiday it was fantastic.


    by moli

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