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Monday 26 July 2010

Narrative by Joan

This is a narrative about "Fire" written and presented by Joan from Room 8 of Glenbrae School.

4 comments:

  1. Great explaining about your narrative. What we liked was that You used good expression, and a clear voice.
    Since you were in a class room, it was a bit hard for us to hear you. From Madeline,Stella and Cameron.

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  2. Hi Joan it was really cool about what you said on your narrative.

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  3. Hi Joan i liked your Narrative!!!!!!! ********

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  4. Hi Joan I really like your story about fire Ireally like it because you spoke nicely and clearly. It was the best story ever.

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